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or Longing for the Blue Lagoon
Published on May 13, 2006 By Toblerone In Humor
Supercilious Pillow Talk
by
K.C.D.L. (AKA Toblerone)


It is morning, a man and a woman lie in bed together facing each other.

“What are you looking at me like that for?” she asks.

“Ah, umm, I don’t want to say, it’s silly…”

“Go on, tell me,” she pleads.

He opens his mouth, hesitates, closes it, opens it again and then says:

“Okay. I think you have very sexy eyebrows.”

She considers this.

“That is….really a very weird thing to say. Personally I think they could do with a pluck.”

“Oh no, I love your eyebrows the way they are!”

“That was rather emphatic. You really think my disgusting hairy eyebrows are sexy?”

“They aren’t disgusting and hairy. I honestly think most girls over-pluck their eyebrows.”

“You seem to have thought about this a lot. Oh god, I’m dating an eyebrow fetishist aren’t I?”

“I am not a fetishist. It’s not like you’ve got a couple of caterpillars up there. It isn’t like I’ve got a thing for Frida Kahlo or anything. Yours are just more natural looking than most girls, I like that.”

“Oh, well maybe I should stop shaving my legs and pits as well?”

“No, I wouldn’t go quite that far. You always have to take a compliment and twist it around. I knew I shouldn’t have said anything.”

“Frankly I’m glad you did. Now I know what I’m dealing with here: an eyebrow-crazed sexual deviant!”

There is a short silence.

“Do you still love me anyway?”

“Maybe. I think so. I think I can learn to live with it. I’ll feel weird if I catch you staring at my eyebrows though.”

“I’ll stare at your breasts then, will that make you happy?”

“Yes, yes it would,” she pauses “Who the hell is Frida Kahlo?”

“She was a famous mono-browed nymphomaniac.”

“Oh, the one Selma Hayek played, I remember now. Well I wouldn’t mind looking like Selma.”

“Nah, I like you better. Your boobs are smaller.”

“So I’ve got hairy eyebrows and small boobs, is that what you’re saying? You’re not painting a very attractive picture here.”

“Umm, I think it’s time we got up and made breakfast.”

“Okay, but don’t think you’ve wheedled your way out of this conversation.”

“No ma’am.”

“I really think we need to get to the bottom of this psychosis.”

“Yes ma’am.”

Miles away in his semi-preserved childhood bedroom, a poster of a young Brooke Shields curls slightly.

Comments (Page 1)
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on May 13, 2006

You still got it!  This is great.  Was it real, or did you just make a no win situation (they always are when talking to a woman) very humorous?

on May 13, 2006
You still got it! This is great. Was it real, or did you just make a no win situation (they always are when talking to a woman) very humorous?


No, I just made it up. I just started with idea of a guy giving his girlfriend a weird compliment and the rest sort of wrote itself. I'm glad you liked it.
on May 13, 2006
Hehe...I liked this. I don't really take compliments well, so I do usually twist them around to make them sound bad, or something funny out of them. Maybe I need to stop doing that....hmm....
on May 13, 2006
Hehe...I liked this. I don't really take compliments well, so I do usually twist them around to make them sound bad, or something funny out of them. Maybe I need to stop doing that....hmm....


You're a beautiful human Sal I'm glad I wrote something you could relate to. Thanks.
on May 13, 2006
You have no idea how much this made me laugh
on May 13, 2006
You have no idea how much this made me laugh


I was just thinking about girl's eyebrows and how similar the eyebrows of most girls I've liked are. The idea of telling a girl how much I liked their eyebrows made me chuckle, so I wrote this on the off-chance someone else might find it amusing. I came so close to not writing it. I'm glad you liked it.
on May 15, 2006
Oh wow JU has undied, what a concept!
on May 15, 2006

Oh wow JU has undied, what a concept!

Good quote!  Maybe we can call it "Joe of the dead"?

on May 15, 2006
Good quote! Maybe we can call it "Joe of the dead"?




...or maybe we should renamed it Lazarus User
on May 15, 2006

...or maybe we should renamed it Lazarus User

on May 15, 2006
I've had real conversations like this before. For the most part, they ended badly for me.

Good writing, by the way and a good laugh too.
on May 15, 2006
I've had real conversations like this before. For the most part, they ended badly for me.


I think 99 times out of 100 it turns out badly for the bloke. We aren't built to win conversations that involve deep seated female insecurities.

It's cool it turned out to be somewhat realistic. Actually I've had conversations sort of like this too, but this wasn't based on any of them.

Good writing, by the way and a good laugh too.


Score!
on May 15, 2006
Yup, three point action from waaaay outside the line. Well done...
on Jun 11, 2006
Hehe. Nice. And so true.
on Jun 11, 2006
lol! Loved it!
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